Dialogue
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Dad: “99 bottles of beer on the wall, 99 bottles of beer, take one down, pass it around, 98 bottles of beer on the wall… Damn keys! Hey! Open up!” (Knocks door repeatedly)
Mum: “where the hell have you been? Dinner’s gone all cold and soggy! You were supposed to be back by seven! A freaking call would’ve been nice! Wait a minute, what’s that smell? Oh my god! You’ve been drinking?!”
Dad: “97 bottles of beer on the…”
Mum: “And here I thought you were at a meeting! I slaved and I slaved for what? You useless piece of crap! You better get your act together if not this marriage is over!
Dad: “ Shut up! Just shut up! For four years I’ve endured all of your screaming. I can’t do it anymore. You’re right, I am useless. I got fired today. I’m just so tired. You know what? Let’s… let’s split…
misterryan said
I can’t get the material to load to listen to the sound. I have to critique this based on my memory from class. The piece tries too hard. It suffers from thinking the audience won’t be interested unless you add ridiculous conflict to the scene. It makes the whole creation unrealistic.